altogether something

Here's a story of curiosity and exploration and enjoying where it took me.

I was (orig. AmE) fooling around with a corpus interface (in preparation for teaching students how to use it), and I asked it for adjectives that go after the adverb altogether. I don't know why I chose that word, but I did. And I noticed something: in the British National Corpus (BNC), the word was followed by adjectives that struck me as strange. Things like:  altogether happy, altogether lovely, and altogether innocent.

Negative and positive?

At first, I wondered: does altogether have different semantic prosody in British and American English? Semantic prosody is when a word that could be defined in a neutral way nevertheless tends to occur in contexts that are mostly negative or mostly positive. So, the word ends up having bad or good connotations. I felt like I was used to altogether occurring in more negative contexts. 

Now, the first thing to do here is to ask: does the fact that happy follows altogether mean that altogether happy is referring to something good? The answer is no: looking at two words together is not enough because there could be a not lurking before those two words. And sure enough, all the BNC examples of altogether happy are actually describing a non-happy state:

Nine examples with 'altogether happy' highlighted: He wasn't altogether happy' 'ted was not altogether happy', 'he is not altogether happy', 'it was not an altogether happy experience', etc.

So in a lot of these cases, BrE is using not altogether+positive adjective, and it is probably often a form of British understatement. If rather than saying the congregation was unhappy, someone says they're not altogether happy, you can probably bet that the congregation was unhappy.

That said, the cases of altogether lovely and innocent were mostly not negated—so there was something else going on.

Which adjectives?

I wanted to compare it to American English, so I moved on to the Corpus of Global Web-Based English. I checked a few things:

  • Is altogether used more in BrE than in AmE?  
    • A bit:  20 times per million words (pmw) in BrE versus 17 in AmE.
      • But altogether has various uses, so...
  • Is altogether used to modify adjectives more in BrE than in AmE?
    • A tiny bit: 2.43 pmw v 2.17  in AmE for altogether ADJ (1.1x more common in BrE)
    • But the more complex the altogether construction, the more British English favo(u)rs it:
      • not altogether ADJ is .49 pmw in BrE & .37 in AmE  (1.3x more common in BrE)
      • an altogether ADJ (where the altogether ADJ is therefore in a noun phrase) is nearly twice as common in BrE (.7 pmw v .38).

So a phrasing like It was an altogether different experience probably sounds more British than American.

Then I looked at what the top adjectives following altogether in BrE and AmE were:

BrE AmE
different (240)  different (179)
new (38) new (20)
better (24)*clear (17)
*surprising (18) *sure (15)
darker (17) *surprising (10)
lovely, *sure (15)     useless (8)
*surprised (13) absent (7)
*clear (12) possible, unique, *happy, unexpected, ignorant (6)

Formatting key for the table:  (number) = number of occurrences in the corpus (~387 million words)
not found in the other country, not in the other's top 10 & at least 4x more frequent than the other country, not in the other's top 10 but   *predominantly negated

 

So, what we can see here for altogether + ADJ?
  • BrE & AmE have in common the ability to use altogether to describe absolute states (particularly when negated). In other words, altogether can be a synonym for completely or absolutely in both dialects.  If something (let's say a linguistic blog post) is not altogether clear, it's saying that there is a pinnacle of clarity that the blog post does not meet. If you say two things are altogether different, then you're saying that there's no way in which they are the same. (This is usually overstatement, but still, we can tell it's being used as an absolute state because it's not weird to say two things are completely different.)

  • BrE allows altogether with comparatives (darker, better and further down the frequency list: grander, bigger, harder, easier, higher), and AmE doesn't seem to like that. If an adjective is used in the comparative, that's a signal that it is a gradable adjective rather than an absolute one. So, BrE can use altogether with states that you could still have more of. In the following contexts, altogether seems to be a synonym of very much:   
                 
    • he's an altogether better player 
    • This vision is focused around an' Altogether Better Durham', 
    • This appears to be an altogether better bet.       
    • He strikes me as an altogether darker figure than Paisley  
    • Three years later he discovered something altogether darker 
    • This is an altogether darker affair than Babe's first adventure 
  • The mostly-AmE unnegated adjectives generally describe bad states: useless, absent, ignorant—which explains why I felt weird about hearing pleasant adjectives with altogether. The one mostly-BrE unnegated, non-comparative one is lovely—but I must note: in the corpus, it is mostly found in Muslim religious discourse.
The British use of altogether with comparative/gradable adjectives seems comparable to the use of altogether elsewhere in sentences, where it can mean 'on the whole'. Here's an example from the OED:
  • He was altogether a gentle and generous man.
Compare that to:
  • He was an altogether gentle and generous man.
For you, do they mean the same thing?

For me the first says 'all things considered, he was a gentle and generous man' and the second is more 'he was a completely gentle and generous man'. But I would suspect that that distinction may not feel as clear for BrE speakers, given the collocations we've seen above.

Has it always been this way?

As it stands, I can't find a dictionary that both (a) distinguishes the use of altogether as an adjective intensifier from it in other adverbial uses (some do, some don't), and (b) notes that the adjective-intensifier usage can sometimes (particularly in BrE) mean something other than 'completely'. And it's not covered in the grammars I've checked or in Algeo's British or American English?

Is that because it's new in BrE? I looked at a few of the altogether+comparative examples in the British part of Google Books, and it looks like altogether better has been used for a long time, as have some others. (Altogether worse, on the other hand, barely moves the needle.)

google ngram graph, showing altogether with better, larger, higher, darker, greater. Altogether better has the most usage and particularly high usage in the 19th century

So, if it's not new in BrE, could it be that it was taken to America and then lost there? Computer says yes:

Google ngram viewer graph showing lots of use of 'altogether better' in US and UK books in the 19th century, but then it starts falling in US after 1860s and is negligible in US after 1920 .


The Corpus of Historical American English shows that in the 19th century, it was common in AmE to use altogether with gradable adjectives like pleasant, lovely, probable, and easy—and without negation.



Investigating words is good for me

So I started this with something of a bias. An assumption that the more general use of altogether+ADJ must be newer—that people got more 'lax' in its use as time went on. And what I discovered was the opposite: that Americans have been 'tightening up' how this expression can be used. It's certainly not the only time American English has done such a thing—so I should have known better than to have that bias. But biased we all are. As long as we're willing to challenge those biases, we can learn things. 

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2 comments

  1. There's a worship song that we sometimes sing at my church, part of whose chorus goes
    "You're altogether lovely
    Altogether worthy
    Altogether wonderful to me."
    Which is what I immediately thought of when I read your post!

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